The Three Robbers

This blog post was originally published on Paul de Gregorio's blog on Wednesday 11 January 2012.

With two wee boys – one aged six and the other two – a visit to The Eric Carle Museum of Picture Book Art was top of our to-do list in Massachusetts last summer. It’s refreshing to know that America can deliver attractions like The Eric Carle Museum of Picture Book Art – not all attractions need to be crammed full of rollercoasters and fast food franchises. We spent a magical afternoon at The Eric Carle Museum of Picture Book Art, marvelling at the artwork on display, completing a treasure hunt and taking part in a storytelling session. The unexpected bonus was an additional exhibition of the work of Tomi Ungerer, a French artist, illustrator and author, who’s work until then I was unfamiliar with.

Six year Mackenzie’s personal tribute to the museum scene in Ferris Bueller’s Day Off.

The museum provided me with a magical memory that I will treasure until the day I die. I sat in the Tomi Ungerer exhibition with my two year old on my lap and read to him an exhibition copy of The Three Robbers. First published in 1959, it’s a charming tale of three robbers with tall black hats who use their plundered bounty to buy a castle in order to look after the abandoned children of the land. Exquisitely illustrated, it’s a tale that stands the test of time. The sentiment seeping through the story struck a chord with me as I sat in the museum cuddling my two year old. I immediately thought of the wonderful Child’s i Foundation – a charity extremely close to my heart.

Child’s i Foundation are awesome. Their Baby and Family Centre in Malaika, Uganda provides short-term care for up to 24 at-risk babies; and the tenacious Lucy Buck, the founder of Child’s i Foundation is constant source of inspiration to me. I’ve been fortunate enough to meet Lucy now on a couple of occasions – I invited her to speak at the Institute of Fundraising Scotland Conference 2011 where she delivered an unforgettable and emotionally charged closing plenary. Not a dry eye in the house, or was that just me? Lucy has a penchant for making me cry.

As a thank you to Lucy, I presented her with the copy of The Three Robbers that we bought in the museum. This was a huge wrench for me – this book conjured up images and emotions of a magical moment. Of course, I had to ask both the boys’ permission first. But the charming tale reminded me of Lucy and her amazing journey with Child’s i Foundation.

I know Lucy realised the significance the gift.

When she returned to Uganda I received an email that reduced me tears. Again. It’s a picture of Lucy reading The Three Robbers to one of the children in the Malaika Baby and Family Centre. 

From Lucy’s email, “It is a beautiful book and I must admit I keep it in my office as I don't want the kids to damage it but it is becoming a bit of a favourite!”

Lucy’s email was heartening but on Christmas Eve, Child’s i Foundation delivered a level of personal donor care that I believe can only be demonstrated by a small charity in tune with their donors. On Christmas Eve I received a handmade, hand-written Christmas Card. No design agency was involved. No clever creative or call to action. Instead, a thank you. The card design featured the hand-print of eight month old, Liam [as a parent I know how much fun was had making that hand-print] and inside a hand written message from Lucy. It read,

“Thank you so much for all your support this year and believing in me and Child’s i Foundation… “

My thank you card from Lucy, and Liam!

I’ve done nothing. My £2.50 a month is not going to change the world, but Childs i Foundation make me feel like I’m genuinely making a difference. I believe Childs i Foundation when they say, “The personal contribution of each and every participant makes as they support Child’s i Foundation – whether through time, money or love – is something we recognise and value highly.” I buy this.

The innovation Child’s i Foundation have demonstrated online is well documented. There is a strong community online supporting and advocating their work. But this magical personal touch really does strengthen the bond with their donors. The proof is in the pudding – this evening, I’ve doubled my monthly contribution to Child’s i Foundation. Perhaps Lucy should don a tall black hat?

Ten copywriting lessons fundraisers can learn from Dr Seuss

On the 2nd of March 1904, in Springfield, Massachusetts one of America's finest writers was born. You may not have heard of Theodor Seuss Geisel, but I hope you are familiar with the wonderful writing of Dr Seuss. Over a 53 year period, Dr Seuss published 46 timeless children's books.

With a young family I have loved rediscovering the imagination-bending back catalogue of Dr Seuss. So much so, that on a family vacation to Boston and Cape Cod in 2008, we hired a car and drove the 95 miles to Springfield to visit The Dr Seuss National Memorial Sculpture Garden. Now, I know there is a Seuss Landing at Islands of Adventure in Universal Studios, Orlando, but the afternoon in the serene and peaceful memorial scuplture garden with 11 month old Mackenzie is a memory I'll treasure for the rest of my days.

The Dr Seuss Memorial Sculpture Garden, Springfield, Massachusetts.

Beyond the seemingly nonsensical rhymes a subtle moral lesson frequently lurks in the works of Dr Seuss. Although Geisel made a point of not beginning the writing of any of his stories with a moral in mind because he was adamant that "kids can see a moral coming a mile off." He chose his words carefully, sparingly and  intelligently. He was a brilliant copywriter. One that anyone involved in writing fundraising copy should study and admire. In no particular order, here are 10 fundraising copywriting lessons I've learned from Dr Seuss,

1. Believe in yourself.
"And will you succeed? Yes! You will, indeed! (98 and 3/4 per cent guaranteed.) Kid, you'll move mountains!" Oh, The Places You'll Go!, 1990.
You are clearly the best person to tell this story. When communicating with donors, speak with authority, confidence and self-belief.

2. Be truthful at all times.
"I meant what I said and I said what I meant...An elephant's faithful one hundred per cent!" Horton Hatches The Egg, 1940.
Be honest with donors. Don't fail to deliver on promises made to donors and don't make exaggerated claims. Establishing trust is vital for the relationship to flourish.

3. Be courteous and polite.
"But I'm a good sport, so I'll just let him rest. For a host, above all, must be nice to his guest." Thidwick The Big-Hearted Moose, 1948.
Every touch-point, whether it be a face-to-face encounter with a donor or the administration procedure of the latest Direct Mail appeal is an advertisement for your charity. Make it count. Some people call it stewardship, others donor care. Either way, get the basics right. Is the envelope addressed correctly? With the correct salutation? Will you acknowledge the gift within 24 hours?

4. Speak with passion.
"I speak for the trees, for the trees have no tongues. And I'm asking you, sir at the top of my lungs." The Lorax, 1971.
You have a duty to tell your beneficiary's story - and its a darn site more engaging if the person sharing the story is passionate, powerful and persuasive. When you sit down to write, make sure your 'dander' is up!

5. Expose injustice and inequality.
"I know up on top you are seeing great sights, but down here on the bottom, we too should have rights." Yertle The Turtle, 1958.
Don't forget fundraising basic principles – reveal a strong proposition and offer the donor a simple and clear solution.

6. Never be afraid to try something new.
"Sam! If you will let me be, I will try them. You will see. Sam! I like green eggs and ham! I do! I like them, Sam-I-am!" Green Eggs And Ham, 1960.
Each Direct Mail appeal is an opportunity to test, to refine and to try something different. Use these tests to refine your Direct Mail campaigns.

7. Size doesn't matter.
"Don't give up! I believe in you all! A person's a person, no matter how small!" Horton Hears A Who!, 1954.
No matter how small your organisation is, you can make a difference. No matter how small you are, you can make a difference. Think about it, young children regularly raise ridiculous amounts of money for charity - try telling them that they're too small to make a difference. One of my personal favourites remains Jack Draws Anything.

8. Challenge perceived wisdom.
"There's no limit to how much you'll know, depending how far beyond zebra you go." On Beyond Zebra, 1955.
Floob, Fuddle and Snee. There are 20 twenty letters on beyond Z in the world of Dr Seuss; and you thought the alphabet stopped at Z. Challenge perceived wisdom. Don't settle for 'we've always done it that way.'

9. Let your imagination run riot.
"Stop telling such outlandish tales, stop turning minnows into whales." And To Think That I Saw It On Mulberry Street, 1937.
We've all got a Marco's Dad in our team. Don't listen to people who quash your imagination and creativity - let it run riot. One day, Marco transforms a plain horse and wagon on Mulberry Street "into a story that no one can beat!" That's the sort of Direct Mail appeal your donors want to read.

10. You've got to care.
"Now that you're here, the word of the Lorax seems perfectly clear. Unless some one like you cares a whole awful lot, nothing is going to get better. It's not." The Lorax, 1971.
Whatever the cause, whatever the fight, you can make a difference. But you've got to care. Make it apparent in your fundraising copy.